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It was reported by the newspaper that three pedestrians and one dog were struck by a motorist who was driving a red sports car.

Choose which sentence revision is most effective.

A) The newspapers reported that three pedestrians and one dog were struck
by a motorist driving a red sports car.

B) It was reported by the newspaper that three pedestrians and one dog were
struck by a motorist driving a red sports car.

C) It was reported by the newspaper that a motorist struck three pedestrians
and one dog and he was driving a red sports car.

D) It was reported by the newspaper that three pedestrians and one dog were
struck by a motorist who was driving a red sports car.

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The likely answer is D. It is the most effective

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