Hello, this is not a question, but I wrote a poem and I want to see what any of ya’ll thinks about it. it’s my work
Tongue tied
Staring at myself after a mistake
Kills me more than a bellyache
It’s not me that I saw that day
Anyone else who wasn’t me may
have been put to be the prey
My tongue stuck onto the top of my throat
For so I snatched a pen and wrote
For my mother this is
For the days she spent teaching lessons I never learned
today for her sympathetic eyes my heart burned
I wish I could apologize, but it never heals
The look she gives me, enough it reveals
My tongue stuck onto the top of my throat
For so I snatched a pen and wrote
For my father this is
For the days he believed what I thought I was
today for his disappointment my brain has pause
His hands are balled and his legs are closed
To fight back for me he is posed
My tongue stuck onto the top of my throat
For so I snatched a pen and wrote
For my siblings this is
For the days they haven’t judged my side
today the look of question they try to hide
The time they thought they knew me
was a day that they and I have not see
My tongue stuck onto the top of my throat
For so I snatched a pen and wrote
My tongue still stuck onto the top my throat
But I opened my mouth and spoke
Words and vowels slip out of my control
Feeling my body fall back into a black hole
Betrayal I feel, betrayal from my mind
Shattering my heart that I once thought was kind
My tongue relieved from the pain I let out
For so I start a new page and happiness I shout