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Write a poem on being underwater. In your own words. plz plz ​

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Answer:

Underwater

I was drowning.

Underwater.

Fighting for air,

fighting to swim.

Drowning, underwater.

Something held me down,

Something kept me from taking a breath.

Drowning, underwater.

I tried to float, but always sank.

I tried to breathe, but always choked.

Drowning, underwater.

I had no escape.

But you saved me.

You cut me loose.

Taught me how to swim,

taught me I could breathe.

Inhale, exhale.

Taught me I could smile,

taught me I could laugh.

You showed me kindness.

You showed me happiness.

When I found you,

I found me.

You gave me life,

you gave me purpose.

But you changed your mind.

Was I not enough?

not smart enough

not pretty enough

not skinny enough

not **** enough

not happy enough?

Was I too much?

Did I ask too much?

Did I care too much?

Did I love too much?

Did I need too much?

Did I hurt you?

Did I scare you?

Why were you so ******* afraid

Afraid of change

afraid of unknowns

afraid to let me in

afraid to feel what we felt

afraid of distance

afraid of trying

afraid to love me

afraid to let me love you

afraid of the future

afraid of us

afraid of this happiness

afraid it wouldn't last

But I needed you.

Now I'm drowning.

Underwater.

Fighting for air,

fighting to swim.

Drowning, underwater.

You're holding me down,

You're keeping me from taking a breath.

Drowning, underwater.

I'm trying to float, but I'm sinking.

I'm trying to breathe, but I'm choking.

Drowning, underwater.

There is no escape.

But I can't forget you.

Your words grab my ankles,

tying me to the ocean bottom.

I'm kicking and fighting,

but your touch paralyzes me.

I'm crying for help,

but your memory suffocates me.

No one sees me,

no one hears me,

no one saves me.

You don't save me.

Drowning,

Underwater.

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