Question

Like Will Smith stated “your heart, your life, your happiness is your responsibility.

Most people, including myself, do not realize their own responsibilities.
My three major responsibilities include my family, work, and myself
My family responsibilities are to care for my parents and siblings, supporting them, taking care of the household like cleaning, cooking, helping my siblings with their homeworks and a lot more.
My work responsibilities are to look after my job, thoughtful interpretation of work, to be a smart, successful employer, and respect everyone the same

My responsibilities are to take care of my studies, to get my high school diploma, to become a successful person that will make me happy and my other responsibility is to take care of my health, my skin and my hair and also to cut toxic people out of my life.
( can someone please help me to fix my essay and also give me a conclusion plz) :)

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

try not to repeat "My responsibilities".

In your last paragraph, try doing this...

" In terms on my education, my studies remain my first responsibility, to get educated, to earn a diploma and to become a successful person in the future, however in order for me to be a responsible person I need to focus on taking care of myself... ......"

something like that...

but other wise it is okay...