Question

Im asking this a second timeee.

PLEASEE make this sentence more 7th grader like!! (its in the assesment so i cant copy it completely)
Mount Rushmore is an impressive sculpture. Each year, millions of people visit the 60-foot-tall images of American presidents George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, Abraham Lincoln, and Theodore Roosevelt carved into the Black Hills of South Dakota. Mount Rushmore is not without controversy. It was built on land sacred to the Native Americans. In addition, the Sioux were forced off the land after a series of battles.

Answer 1

mount rushmore is a very amazing sculpture. each year, tons of people visit the 60-foot-tall copies of the americna presidents thomas jefferson, abraham lincoln, george washington, and theodore roosevelt. these images are carved into south dakota's black hills. however, not everyone likes mount rushmore as it was built on native american's land that is considered very important and sacred to them; as well as the sioux tribe, after being in war many times, were forced to get off the land.

Answer 2

Mount Rushmore is an amazing work of art carved in the black hills in South Dakota. Each year, millions of people visit the sculpture to see the presidents, George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, Abraham Lincoln, and Theodore Rosevelt. Although it is a truly beautiful statue it is not all there for the looks, it represents freedom and hope.