Which is the best revision of this sentence? In a large box, the baker donated bread to the fund-raiser. The baker donated to the fund-raiser bread in a large box. The baker donated a large box of bread

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Which is the best revision of this sentence?

In a large box, the baker donated bread to the fund-raiser.
The baker donated to the fund-raiser bread in a large box.
The baker donated a large box of bread to the fund-raiser.
In a large box, the fund-raiser had bread donated by the baker.