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Select the clearest, most grammatically correct sentence.

When the baby cried, his mother changed his diaper and fed him a bottle.
When the baby cried, his diaper needed changing and his mother fed him a bottle.
Crying loudly, the mother picked up the baby to change his diaper and then fed him a bottle.

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The clearest, most grammatically correct sentence is the first one. "When the baby cried, his mother changed his diaper and fed him a bottle."

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Answer: "When the baby cried, his mother changed his diaper and fed him a bottle."

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