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Which change to Example 1 would help the sentences flow more smoothly and read more coherently?

A) We are all too ashamed to admit it, and my friends and I all enjoy this one children's TV show.
B) My friends and I all enjoy this one children's TV show, we however are all too ashamed to admit it.
C) My friends and I all enjoy this one children's TV show, but we are all too ashamed to admit it.
D) We are all too ashamed to admit it, but anyway my friends and I all enjoy this one children's TV show.

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The answer to your question is C
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