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Is the following question punctuated correctly?

What makes me nervous, is that I entered the numbers of 2 of my Credit Cards that were not accepted, however, my VISA debit card number was accepted.

If not please rewrite it with the correct punctuation.

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* Remove the comma after 'nervous.'

* Replace the comma after 'accepted' with a semicolon.

BTW.... You should know that...

* The number 2 should be written as 'two.'

* The words 'Credit Cards' should NOT be capitalized.

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