Question

Read the sentence from a personal narrative.

My grandfather used to spend hours telling me stories I loved to hear.

Which best revises the sentence above to make the writing more precise?​

Answer 1

Answer:My grandfather always had a lot of stories to tell, and I would always beg to hear them. He would talk for hours, and I did not even notice. I loved these stories, and I loved that my grandfather was willing to spend hours sharing them with me.

Explanation: 1st one

Answer 2

My Grandfather would spend hours telling me stories that I’d love to hear.