Can check my grammar and give me some suggestions? Maybe some where doesn’t make sense or connect? Or you can’t understand? Thank you!!!!!!!

DivingTobi asked Jun 21, 2023

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DivingTobi asked Jun 21, 2023

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it looks all correct to me and the punctuation is good to

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The Nightman answered Jun 27, 2023

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