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Can check my grammar and give me some suggestions? Maybe some where doesn’t make sense or connect? Or you can’t understand? Thank you!!!!!!!

Can check my grammar and give me some suggestions? Maybe some where doesn’t make sense-example-1
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Answer:

it looks all correct to me and the punctuation is good to

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