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Just check my punctuation and capitalization please.

Just check my punctuation and capitalization please.-example-1

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Answer:

This is a grammer thing (SUGGESTION) : Maybe "While her parents hugged and touched her hair, Emma cried and trembled in fear."

Or

"It felt really hot, like warm water on her head."

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It’s correct . Have a great day
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