I need help on what I should change with these lyrics. I know the rhyming scheme might be a bit unusual but please help me fix anything that might need to be fixed!! :)
SOMEDAY- by Jayda Javier
VERSE 1
You say I have a choice
But you still make all of my future plans
Tell me to use my voice
Then shut me up once you get the chance
You say I should be me
“Don’t change yourself for anyone”
But then urge me to be
The only version of me that you are proud of
PRE-CHORUS
Ooh, eventually I’ll be something great
Until that day comes, I guess that I can wait
CHORUS
Cause someday
You’ll regret the dreams
That you always took away from me
That you’d lock up and throw away the key
Saying, “dreams only ever take away”
And someday
The world will be mine
It will be worth every single rhyme
That I quietly kept inside my mind
The ones you would never let me say
POST-CHORUS
Yeah, someday
I will prove that you were wrong about me
And someday
They’ll sing a song about me
And it will go like
Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh
Oooooooh, someday
Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh
Ooh ooh ooh ooh ooh
Oooooooh, someday