Question

Read the paragraph from Carmen’s personal narrative, "At Bat." "Carmen Martinez, number 42." I took a deep breath as my name rumbled through the loudspeaker. I was so nervous! With each step from the on-deck circle to the batter’s box, I thought my knees would give out and I would collapse. My stomach was in knots. One chance. I had one chance to help my team win this game so we could go to the state semifinals. I could hear the crowd cheering for me. "You got this!" they screamed. "You can do this!" I hoped I could. Which is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

Answer 1

Its B).

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Answer 2

I thought my knees would give out and I would collapse.

Step-by-step explanation:

A sensory detail refers to the use of the five senses of taste, touch, smell, sound, and sight in a description. And a vivid sensory detail means a description or detail that is graphic, realistic, a bit more in-depth detail.

In the given paragraph, the narrator/ speaker reveals her nervousness on hearing her name called. and in describing her nervousness at what she was about to do in front of everyone, she gave a description of what her body was going through. She revealed that she "thought [her] knees would give out and [she] would collapse." This graphic detailing of her body is an example of vivid sensory detail.