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The balloon rocketed up into the icy air. We were

frightened because it was moving quickly. However, the
balloon was completely safe in the end.
Which revisions did you make? Select all that apply.
O I used stronger adjectives and adverbs.
O I eliminated repetition in the description.
O I used more vivid verbs.
O I used more specific nouns.

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I choose B cuz it made sense to me
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