Question

Hello! Not trying to be disrespectful but ONLY ANSWER IF YOU HAVE SUGGESTIONS OR CORRECTIONS. Please. What else can I improve here? Thank you!

My interpretation of this passage describes the debt we owe to mother nature for providing us with a yin and yang to everything on it. The main opposition in this passage is medicine, virtue, poison, vice, where both in men and herbs there is a good and evil. I also found something interesting that reminded me of TKAM, where we discussed how murdering someone doesn’t make you a murderer. In this passage, I was reminded in different wording that virtue becomes a vice when abused, and wrongdoings can be justified with good ethics and justified reason. Anything with irrational abuse and hate can become venomous but, with the right intentions can be the medicine that resides in everything unknowingly.

Answer 1

Answer: A suggestion I have is to remove the comma after vice and instead place a dash (-)

Explanation: Other than this, I have no suggestions. This paragraph is written perfectly