Question

Can you please judge these lyrics for me?

Verse 1:
I wish that life was longer, wish I had more time
To tell you how I feel and what's been on my mind
I wish that someday, I'll get a chance to say what I want to say

I wish that I was stronger, wish I had the words
To tell you that I love you so much that it hurts inside
I wish I didn't lie awake at night
Pre-Chorus:
Sleepless, always thinking about you
Wishing I didn't have to live without you
But I know, oooh
Chorus:
I'll be dancing by the wishing well
For the rest of my life
Wishing for the impossible
You are the impossible

I'll be singing by the wishing well
A song of hope
Waiting on a dream that will never come true
That dream is you

The rhyming technique is kinda odd, but i hope its ok!

Answer 1

Answer:So you can see I'm tryin', you won't see me cryin'

I'll just keep on smilin', I'm good (Yeah, I'm good)

And it just keeps on pilin', it's so terrifying

But I keep on smilin', I'm good (Yeah, I'm good)

I've been carin' too much for so long

Been comparin' myself for so long

Been wearin' a smile for so long, it's real

So long, it's rеal, so long, it's real

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Answer 2

U are good at that. I suck at song writing

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