Question

Rewrite each sentence in two ways to clarify the meanings of the pronouns.

Lady Crawford emailed Ms. White while she was in the hospital.

Tidus reported to his supervisor when he was overseas on deployment.
Sarah offered to clean Mariah’s apartment while she was on vacation.

Beth and Melissa were both late since she had lost her watch.

Answer 1

While in the hospital, Lady Crawford emailed Ms. White.
Lady Crawford emailed Ms. White, who was in the hospital.

When Tidus overseas on deployment, he reported to his supervisor.
While his supervisor was overseas on deployment, Tidus reported to him.

While Sarah was on vacation, she offered to clean Maria’s apartment.
While Maria was on vacation, Sarah offered to clean her apartment.

Since Melissa lost her watch, both she and Beth were late.
Since Beth had lost Melissa’s watch, they both were late.