Answer:
It looks like it is going to rain today there are a lot of clouds in the sky the sun is not shining i will play inside if it rains
Step-by-step explanation:
Condense your writing and only keep the most important ideas. Also add punctuation.
Same sentence + punctuation:
- It looks like it is going to rain today, there are a lot of clouds in the sky and the sun is not shining. I will play inside if it rains.
Other ideas:
- The cloudy sky makes it look like it's going to rain today, which means I'll have to play inside.
- The sun is hiding behind the clouds and I think it might rain soon, which means I will have to play inside.
- The cloudy sky threatens rain; I will have to play inside if it begins to rain.
(I think you should use a semicolon (;) in the last sentence, not a colon (:) but I may be wrong)