Question

Can someone reword this paragraph for me so it will sound better for my project please and thank you

Rice would be great for the southern colonies because of their great soil. There are indentured servants to help with the work. This is a great chance because there will be many chances to trade with other colonies or other countries in exchange for money or good for yourself and others in the colony.

Answer 1

Rice would be great for the southern colonies. The reason being is because of their great soil. There were indentured servants to help with the work. This is a great chance because there will be plenty chances to trade with other colonies or possibly other countries in exchange for money or goods for yourself and other citizens in the colony.

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