Question

Read a sentence from a draft of an argumentative essay. New facilities built for the Olympics have benefited Atlanta. Which example is the best revision of this sentence? I love all the new facilities that were built in the city of Atlanta for the 1996 Olympic Games. The Olympic Games resulted in cool arenas and other awesome facilities across Atlanta. The facilities built for the Olympics in 1996 resulted in many new jobs for Atlanta’s workers. The plaza, arenas, and dormitories built in Atlanta for the Olympics have greatly benefited the city.

Answer 1

Answer: C The facilities built for the Olympics in 1996 resulted in many new jobs for Atlanta’s workers.

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Answer 2

Atlanta for the 1996 cool arenas