Question

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?

My brother, who recently graduated from medical school, is moving to
New York to begin his residency in ophthalmology.
A. Change the commas after brother and school to dashes.
B. Change the comma after school to a semicolon.
C. Put quotation marks around medical school.
D. No change is needed.

Answer 1

I don’t think there should be any change in the sentence

Answer 2

Answer: I do not believe any change is needed

Explanation: I'm a writer and this is how I would write it. Possible add quotations around the school name hope I helped