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Write a 6 sentence appeal to incoming freshman parents why Los Altos High School(my highschool) is the best choice to send their child. Think about your audience and what parents would want for their child? Safety, opportunity, acceptance, a good education, fun… Choose either ethos, pathos, or logos to persuade the audience and make sure to label what persuasive mode you used.

Plz help me, I'm not very good at these types of stuff

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Los Altos High school is a great school to send your child to because we have a great education program and all the staff is very sweet and helpful. Also, the other students are helpful and agreeable too. We also have some of the best after school and sports programs for your child. The surrounding neighborhoods are very safe and respected and so is the school, we have set rules to keep your child safe and help them learn better! We have great breakfast and lunch menus and we make sure that your child is well fed and always care about feedback. Send your child to Los Altos and that's just one less things to worry about!

I have no idea where your school is, i go to west hall high but i just put what id want to hear from a school if i were sending a child there :) hope its okay, i included the pathos approach too,

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