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can someone help make this paragraph a little less strict, I used an app to translate it and I need to know if it's too formal?​

can someone help make this paragraph a little less strict, I used an app to translate-example-1

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Try asking bout how he is and catch up on things in life instead of different irrelevant topics
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the tengo una amiga is like too much first you are talking about the math class and then you just go to your friend, the friend part is like unnecessary and it doesn't have enough information i dont knowhow to explain it but is kinda dry.

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