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I have one more for you guys to please check and see if it is written properly in spanish.

I think that if the wealthy would donate some of their money it would help poverty. I also believe that if people tried harder to get jobs and money they would succed. I think that people are beginning to become lazy. Poverty could be avoided if more money was donated to them.

Creo que si los ricos donaran parte de su dinero, ayudaría a la pobreza. También creo que si la gente se esforzara más por conseguir trabajo y dinero, lo conseguirían. Creo que la gente empieza a volverse perezosa. La pobreza podría evitarse si se les donara más dinero.

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Answer:

it is good

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