Question

Poem here need you to read it. I get extra credit for my poems soo. It is called Have you ever heard. Tell what parts you like or what I can fix thx

Have you ever heard that snow falls slow
That hearts are not made, not made of gold
Have you every heard the peoples real smiles don’t show
That your heart is cold
And everyone knows
Have you ever heard
Have you every heard, heard
Have you ever heard that your words are rude
That tears fall slow
Have you ever heard your a devil and it shows
That peoples cry’s aren’t always shown
And everyone knows
Have you ever heard
Yo Have you ever heard, heard
If you haven’t heard then open your ears
Pick up your things now and go

Answer 1

I like how you showed emotion like how you said how people real smiles don’t show. It can be relatable to people because it say they fake their smiles so they seem happy but they actually not.