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Can someone fix this poem to make it better?

(This is for my sister lol)

The year is coming to an end, I can’t believe it’s true.
Before we know it, We’ll be moving onto somewhere new.

It seems like only yesterday we entered 5th grade
Think of all the fun we’ve had, and all the progress we’ve made

We studied things like math, reading, and writing
We also learned to do our best and to solve disagreements without arguing.

We played at recess on the monkey bars and slides
We hoped we wouldn’t misbehave and have to sit out on the side.

We’ve grown as learners and as friends but now it’s time to go.
Thanks!

User Aerendir
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Answer:

Its good tho

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User Bryce Drew
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Answer:maybey isntead of a yesterday maybey a few mins, maybe say instead of thanks say thanks for being my friend? and yea thats all great job

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