Which statement best evaluates the effect of adding dialogue in the second
version of the passage?
Passage 1:
Alex and I both laughed as we exited the ride. My queasy stomach
threatened to reveal my fake courage. Alex then informed me that the
next coaster had three loop-de-loops. He was so excited he pumped
his fist in the air. My stomach wasn't as excited as Alex, though. I had to think of some way
to think of some way to stall him.
Passage 2:
"You laughed so hard while riding that coaster!" Alex chuckled as
exited the ride.
"I couldn't help but laugh. It was awesome!" I smiled and swallowed
hard. My queasy stomach threatened to reveal my fake courage.
"Ready to conquer the next one? It has three loop-de-loops." Alex
pumped his fist in the air. My stomach churned at the thought of loop-
de-loops. “Of course, but i’m thirsty. How about we stop to get a drink, O.K,?” I had to keep my secret, and the only way was to stall for someone recovery time.
A. it makes the passage more exciting because the characters are discussing riding a roller coaster
B. it makes the passage more confusing because it is difficult to determine who is speaking
C. it makes the passage more relatable because everyone is afraid of roller coasters
D. it makes the passage more complicated because it illustrates how the narrator is acting more brave than he feels