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Which revision best reduces the wordiness of this sentence?

The teacher, who was inspiring, taught the student how to think creatively.

A .The inspiring teacher taught the student how to think creatively.

B .The teacher who was inspiring taught the student how to think creatively.

C .The teacher taught the student how to think creatively and how to inspire.

D .The teacher, who taught the student how to think creatively, was inspiring.

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Answer:

The answer is A.

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Answer:

I think the answer is A

Step-by-step explanation:

It shortens the sentence but still says the exact same thing

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