Question

Original Sentence: At first, the boy soldiers were excited to be fighting in a battle, but they soon realized the horror of warfare. Revised Sentence: If, at first, the boy soldiers were excited to be fighting in a battle, soon they would realize the horror of warfare.

Answer 1

, but they soon realized the horror of warfare. Revised Sentence: If, at first, the boy soldiers were excited to be fighting in a battle, soon they would realize the horror of warfare