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That was it – the final straw! Daisy would have to kick her brother out
of the club. Jack was two years younger than Daisy, and he looked up
to his big sister. Ms. Carter had hired them to find her missing cat.
Now what would Daisy do? They had started a club for kids who
wanted to solve mysteries. Jack had found a stray cat (one that was
not Ms. Carter's) and had tried to paint it white to trick everyone.