Question

Another poem. Ik Karen’s two in one day. And also my teacher gives me extra credit for my poems so don’t flag. I need a name. Probably watch your mouth. Tell me what I should fix don’t be afraid to tell me.

Watch your words
Watch your mouth
Speak a sentence
And hearts cry out
Watch your tone
Watch your mouth
Because it’s the heart that needs to talk now
Watch your angry
Watch your mouth
Your not thinking and words come out
Watch your laugh
Watch your mouth
you may think it’s funny but they do not now
Watch your sad
Watch your mouth
Your hurt but YOU push others down
Watch your cry
Watch your mouth
You think others are not helping but turn around
The things you say hurt
So watch your mouth
And read this poem when you start to fall out
I hopes this helps, you should realize now.

Answer 1

Watch your angry <-- Is this supposed to be anger instead of angry?

Your not thinking and words come out <-- Your needs to be you're

Your hurt but YOU push others down <-- Needs to be you're not your

Your poem is interesting though, I like it. There were some areas where I didn't really understand however.

These areas include:

"you may think it’s funny but they do not now" <-- I understand this part but maybe try to fix it up better. Maybe like "You may think it's funny, but no one else does"?

"And read this poem when you start to fall out" <-- I can understand the general idea on what you mean here but "fall out" may need more clarifying.

The rest is alright, and since you said "Watch your sad" I would just call the poem "Watch it".

These are my opinions though and you do whatever you want.