Question

New poem. Don’t worry Karen’s I get extra credit so don’t flag. Tell me what I can fix in this poem and I definitely need a name. And of course don’t be afraid to point out a flaw that is the point of this.

You cry when sad,
Smile when your happy,
You scream when your angry,
Frown when your unhappy,

Most people are those,
But other people’s feelings are as blank as a ghost,
They don’t feel none,
The feelings they can feel at most are hidden and shot at an outpost,

Other people feel all of those,
But they feel all feeling in one blow,
They may feel happy and angry,
But I hear people fake it for show,

A few people hide emotions,
But also try to let go,
That is the story no one knows,
I may keep going but i have no room to go.

Answer 1

Suspicion or Our instincts.

Step-by-step explanation:

2nd stanza is a bit too long for the rhythm, but all is good.

Answer 2

second stanza- the lines are a little too long and it doesn't seem like your trying to rhyme. Try this:

Most peoples feelings are just like those,

But other people's feelings are as blank as a ghost,

Their feelings seem to just disappear,

All on the inside reveals no cheer.