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Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow? My little brother loves science and making up his own experiments with things he finds around the house. That is what he is most looking
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Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?

My little brother loves science and making up his own experiments
with things he finds around the house. That is what he is most looking
forward to about going back to school in September. PLEASE HELPPP!! DUE TODAY!

Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow? My little brother-example-1
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C.

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A, B, and D are too long and hard to read.

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