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Is my story good? I wrote it for school Any suggestions?
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Is my story good?
I wrote it for school
Any suggestions?

Is my story good? I wrote it for school Any suggestions?-example-1
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Maybe provide a little more context! No big rewrites or anything, maybe just why they were qualified to be at such a “top secret meeting.” Maybe they’re AP students researching possible vaccines for a school project & a scientist noticed their progress and decided to give them some first hand experience. And maybe add a few details to make it more colorful, like adjectives or interesting verbs.
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Answer: I think it’s good really

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