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You are asked to revise this sentence so it contains no dangling or misplaced modifiers.

After a long walk in the hot sun, a lovely shade tree came into view.

Which choice is the best answer? (5 points)

Select one:
a. There is no revision needed. The original sentence is correct as it is.
b. After a long walk in the hot sun, I saw a beautiful shade tree come into view.
c. A lovely shade tree came into view after a long walk in the hot sun.
d. Coming into view after a long walk in the hot sun was a beautiful shade tree.

User Ramis
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C. Sounds right to me to
User Mr Jerry
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Answer:

C.

(sorry if it's wrong but it sounds correct to me)

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