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"Grandma, can you tell me the story?" "Which one my dear?" "The one where you ran away from home because everyone was bullying you because of your lack of mana!" "Oh dear, didn't you cry because of that one?" "Hmph! N-no I didn't!" "Okay, okay. Well when I was a little girl..."
"Mama, Mama!" "Yes Starlight?" "Today I will get my mana!" "Yes that is right my little star, you will get your mana today." "I'm gonna be the village wizard like Dada!" "Oh my! We have your big brother Titus for that don't we Titus?" "Yeah! I already know how to make a fireball!" ~
"Havana - 10 Mana power! Joseph - 11 Mana power! Starlight - z-z-zero Mana power! Impossible no child has ever had zero!" "Mama, do you hate me now?" "Be quiet! You're such a disgrace! I never should have given birth to you!" "Mama?" Slap! "Shut your mouth! You will bring bad luck to this family! Talking about being a wizard when you have no MP!"
Mama hates me, brother will hate me now too. They didn't even say good night. ZZZ. SPLASH! "Wake up you brat! Time for you to do chores!" Chores... Okay, Firewood first. "Honey are you okay!?" Grandma from the apothecary! "Let's get you inside! Aren't you cold!? Why are you doing something like that?" "? It is my chore?" "Honey little children should not be doing things like this, least of all in this forest! It is the forest mandragoon, known for all the monsters lurking about inside! How about you stay with me?" "Okay!"
"Grandma, is this the right herb?" "Yes it is! Wonderful job Star. I am getting old Star, and I want you to go and travel the world. You are already 5 years old and it has been two years since your mana evaluation. You should be okay to sign up as an adventurer. I taught you all I knew and you learned how to hunt in this forest. I believe you can do it." "B-but what about you? You will be alone!" "Hush, I will be alright you go and venture on. I will always be here. In your heart."
Okay let's go Grandma is sleeping and the villagers already think I am dead. I will go to the town and find a party to join. ~~~ "Hello I would like to be an adventurer." "Yes, how may I help..." "Down here!" "Hello little lady, this is a place for big people. Why are you here?” “Granny said that I should become an adventurer because she is going on a journey to a far away place! So can I be an adventurer?” “Hunny,