Is this a good poem if not what can i improve?

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Answer:

It is a good Poem...

Step-by-step explanation:

Improve the rhyme scheme, if you want to, because it is free-flow at the moment. Throw in a few idioms to make the imagery more vivid.

Cenxui answered Apr 5, 2022

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Its good!! I really enjoyed reading this thank you

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