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Just a poem- i'll do more later (what do yall think)

Tweedledum and Tweedledee
Are said to have a battle
For Tweedledum said Tweedledee
Had frightened off his new cattle
Next thing you know
Along came a foe
And took Tweedledee and Tweedledum’s apple
Now you know
The story from long ago
Of Tweedledum and Tweedledee’s
Little show!

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Answer:

Hey....that's pretty good!

Step-by-step explanation:

Seems to look pretty fun, but you could have rhymed lines 6 & 8; those are the only ones that don't rhyme. You could have line 6's last word end in -le, -el, or -al (line 8's last sound was like an L), or line 8's last word end in the same sound as line 6's. But other than that, it's a great start! I'll give it a 9.5/10.

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