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Which of the following revised sentences best eliminates wordiness?

a.
correct as written
b.
In the next few days, the bus company should announce the new schedule.
c.
The new schedule from the bus company is expected to be possibly posted in the next few days.
d.
The bus company will expect an announcement of its schedule during the next few days.


Please select the best answer from the choices provided

A
B
C
D

2 Answers

4 votes

Answer: The answer is B

Explanation: Just got it right on Edge :)

User MasterRazer
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Answer:

The answer I think is correct is B.

Step-by-step explanation:

I think this one is correct because this makes more sense then the rest, there is a coma ofc, but it also says that the bus company is going to announce their new schedule in the next few days because they shouldn't take too long to announce their bus company. Hopefully this helps you.

User Bruno Eduardo
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