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Is this free verse poem good?

Mysterious shadow

One step outside,
Someone appears
Following me from behind

I turn around,
But no one to appear
I turn back around and keep walking

A shaded spot!
I Ran toward the spot
And looked around for anyone
Insight!

But no,
No one was in sight
Was it my shadow?
I think not
Until I felt something behind me

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It really good. I showed this to my bestie and she said its subpar

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Oooh, this is good like wow you are amazing at this free poem. My favourite part of the poem would the ending because when I read I feel like I am in horror or something which I love :) I truly believe that you can be a great writer one day.

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