Question

Can someone tell me if this essay is good enough the last 2 paragraphs were

Squeaky is also not only attracted to her brother Raymond but she also considers protecting him. Earlier in the story Squeaky said “ All I have to do in life is mind my brother Raymond which is enough.” This evidence shows that Squeaky cares about Raymond and wants to protect him.

As you can see, Squeaky is a very protective character because she is always protecting Raymond. Not only did Squeaky protect Raymond but she also defends him when someone is being disrespectful to him.

Answer 1

Overall I say u did a good job :) nice work

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Answer 2

Yeah, I like it! Is there more I can possibly read? This sounds really interesting not gonna lie!

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