Question

HELP! DUE TODAY Please rewrite or rephrase a bad example of a poem:

People were in awe of me, for I was wonderfully qualified in all blessings
For I was the wealthiest, and well dressed
For I was admirable and graceful in every way
I was all that people aspire to be

But why did I feel ungrateful on the inside?
But why did I have the feeling that something was missing?
Why didn't I have anyone for me like everyone else in town did?

so, I observed the townspeople as they went about their daily lives
hoping, to meet someone for me
but on a quiet summer evening,
I've never felt so alone in my life.

Answer 1

Individuals were in amazement of me, for I was magnificently qualified in all gifts

For I was the richest, and sharp looking

For I was honorable and elegant inside and out

I was all that individuals seek to be

Be that as it may, for what reason did I feel thankless within?

In any case, for what reason did I have the inclination that something was absent?

For what reason didn't I have anybody for me like every other person around did?

along these lines, I noticed the residents as they approached their day by day lives

trusting, to meet somebody for me

be that as it may, on a peaceful summer evening,

I've never felt so alone in my life.



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