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Hello, i am french, Can you help me to correct my mistakes please? (grammar only)

My team and I have worked hard to make our burger holder as environmentally friendly as possible. Burger King is concerned about environmental issues. Therefore, they will be made from the waste found in our restaurants' garbage bins. A new waste bin will be installed in our various restaurants to be able to sort your waste between food and plastic. If our customers play the game and accept to sort their waste in exchange for a reduction, we will find less and less plastic in the sea. We have worked on the different components of this object so that they are reusable and washable in the washing machine or by hand. Obviously, if they were not, the interest of our object would be greatly reduced. This one is made of 80% recycled plastic and 20% wood. The wood will come from the various dumps of our partner cities. Moreover, our waiters will be able to put the burger directly on it. This will allow us to avoid putting plastic packaging around the burgers and will also save us money! In addition, with my colleague Brice, we have made sure that the paper leaflets to promote our object will be 100% made of recycled paper. The factories manufacturing these burger holders should work thanks to the heat provoked by our unsold food that we will burn.



Our customers are the generation of tomorrow, they are willing to pay more to preserve nature.


If we continue to throw our plastic packaging into nature and the sea, many animal species will disappear. The planet is getting warmer by the day and we must avoid this at all costs! The bosses have only one word in mind, the money



The object (burger stand ?) is on the image.

Answer 1

My team and I have been working hard to make our burger holder as environmentally friendly as possible. Burger King is worried about environmental issues. They will therefore be done with the waste found in the garbage containers of our restaurants. A new waste bin will be installed in our various restaurants to be able to sort your waste between food and plastic. If our customers play the game and agree to sort out their waste in exchange for a discount, we will find less and less plastic in the sea. We have worked on the various components of this object to make them reusable and washable in the washing machine or by hand. Of course, if they were not, the interest in our object would be greatly reduced. This is made up of 80% recycled plastic and 20% wood. Wood will come from the various landfills in our partner cities. Moreover, our waiters will be able to put the burger directly into it. This will allow us to avoid putting plastic packaging around the burgers and will also save money! In addition, with my colleague, Brice, we have made sure that the paper flyers to promote our object are 100% recycled paper. The factories manufacturing these burger holders should work thanks to the heat provoked by our unsold foods that we will burn.

Our customers are tomorrow's generation, they are willing to pay more to preserve nature.

If we continue to throw our plastic packaging into nature and sea, many animal species will disappear. The planet is warming from day to day and we must avoid it at any cost! The bosses only have one word in mind, money.

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