Question

Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?

My family has always kept birds. We even had a cockatiel for a while.
My cousin has a parrot, and he is always trying to get out of his cage.
O A. My family has always kept birds, and we even had a cockatiel for a
while, and my cousin has a parrot. He is always trying to get out of
his cage.
B. My family has always kept birds. We even had a cockatiel for a
while. My cousin has a parrot, who is always trying to get out of
his cage.
O C. We had a cockatiel for a while, and my cousin has a parrot, and he
is always trying to get out of his cage. My family has always kept
birds.
D. My family has always kept birds, who try to get out of their cages.
We had a cockatiel for a while, and my cousin has a parrot.

Answer 1

B.

Step-by-step explanation:

B is the correct answer, as it drastically shortens the paragraph without changing the facts within them.