(1) Hiring Jane for a position in your restaurant is an awesome
decision for you.
(2) With her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility,
Jane is an ideal candidate for this position.
(3) As her previous
employer, I have often seen her take personal responsibility for
solving problems - even those caused by others.
(4)Furthermore, customers frequently praised her for making a
great effort to ensure that they had a positive experience.
(5)Hiring Jane will prove to be a decision nobody will regret.
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone
throughout?
A. Replace sentence 1 with: Hiring Jane for a position in your
restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to
all
B. Replace sentence 4 with: Furthermore, she was frequently
praised by customers for making a great effort to ensure
that a positive experience was had.
C. Replace sentence 2 with: With her superior organizational
skills, ability to relate to others, and general sense of
responsibility, she'll be totally great.
D. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, I have
often seen her take personal answerability for deciphering
quagmires - even those resulting from the actions of
negligent colleagues