Question

Hey i need some heelp!

so i have to write a song for music. i need your input on my song.

Verse 1
I have you wrong, I was trying to take it slow
When I really know that you should be mine
You just mad if we go to war
I was trying to put the squeeze on you

Pre-Chorus
Im moving through the changes
And pretending that whats right

Chorus
Still trying to find my way
Still trying to be saved
After trying so hard to recover
From the sun that left the room

Verse 2
I keep trying to get out of bed
For things to stop taking a toll on you, yeah
I know that love is a strong thing
But give me one selfish stranger

Pre-Chorus
Everytime we fail
And I know that I should give up trying

Chorus
Still trying to find my way
Still trying to be saved
After trying so hard to recover
From the sun that left the room

Bridge
No sense in me trying to explain
Why he had come back

Chorus
Still trying to find my way
Still trying to be saved
After trying so hard to recover
From the sun that left the room

Answer 1

ok that's great & it will be even better with the melody

Step-by-step explanation:

are there any high notes in the song?