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Can someone check my ELAR essay?

Can someone check my ELAR essay?-example-1
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Sounds good. Maybe try and take the contractions such as can’t out and instead put can not. I don’t know how your teacher grades but with mine you can’t have contractions. Good luck
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I cant read some of it but what I can read looks really good.

Step-by-step explanation:

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