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How is this essay looking so far? BE HONEST!!!

How is this essay looking so far? BE HONEST!!!-example-1
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your doing pretty good Explanation: you need to revise just a little in the middle but ur fine (that's just what I think tho)

User Tim Ebenezer
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Step-by-step explanation:

yes its right can write it..

if it wrong statement then sry

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